2007-2-8 11:24 PM
珊珊=]
""***︹我愛的是誰?!![[為什麼我這樣花心...]]}
[color=#1b00ff][/color]今次第一次作,,,""冇咩靈感...."我會+油..>3<"
""***︹我愛的是誰?!![[為什麼我這樣花心...]]}(((有d真有d假..))
有D粗俗既語言,,,唔係粗口,,
女主角子**
BI*--一個都幾令女既女仔,,,有一對好大好令既眼睛,,,""好乖,,好純,,好驚自己既家人(特別係阿爸)...但後來.....**讀書好勁..."12歲**同ka and yee 好fd..."]ps:好多男仔霖佢..
ka*--一個好普通既女仔..''有d串...""唔乖...成積唔多好....''12歲...同BI and yee 係好fd...**
yee*--一個有d傻既女仔.,,**ok串...好like打人,(特別係男仔),,暴力狂....搞到好多男仔都唔敢得罪佢....但佢唔打女仔..除左佢憎果d..or,,玩果d""成績ok,,12歲,,同BI and ka 好fd...好憎傑..
男主角子**
傑*--一個傻仔...ok令仔...""成日溝女,,講d野好嘔心....""有d驚yee*(因為yee成日打佢..)成績唔多好....懶串,,,12歲..[[同俊and鋒好fd]]""
俊*--一個好搞笑既人...唔多令仔....""有時講野好無聊and白痴//成績普通....12歲..[[同傑and鋒好fd..]]
鋒*--一個勁扮野既人../.\"..ok令仔掛...''係學校扮自閉...講野勁細聱,,,係出面就好大聱咁爆哂粗...''好神秘...''12歲..[[同傑and俊好fd..]]
會加人...我會同一時間講哂咁多個人....係果個人講野既最後就係佢地既感覺..."
(({CH.1}))
今日就係9月1日啦,,,''
呢班要升中一既學生都好興奮,,緊張,,期待咁返學...
BI*----哇!!!要返學啦...好驚呀...希望快D識到FD啦!!~
另一邊...
KA*----唉,,又要返學,,件校服又唔令,,,
YEE,,---唉,.,琴晚又訓唔著啦...好眼訓呀...但係一諗起返學,,即刻赫到醒哂呀!!!
傑---(好激動咁彈左起身+大叫)唔係呀馬!!!!返學...食屎,,!!(訓返低...)
俊----E,,,咩事呀??!!返學,,??!我一定未訓醒啦,,,(訓返,,)
鋒---返學??!!KEKE,,,又有野玩啦,,,,""
7:45----++
BI+KA+YEE-----好彩趕得到....(跑返學)^^**
傑+俊...仲訓緊....""
俊一早就到左....
睇埋自己係咩班...
BI+KA+YEE就沖過去睇自己咩班,,,
佢地6丁友同班...1D...""
普普通通咁....'''
傑同俊...仲訓到唔知醒,,,""
跟住會點呢,,,請注意下集.....""!!
P.S.第一次作可能無咁好...希望你地支持,.,同比D意見,,,THX!!!!XDD""
2007-2-9 08:45 PM
珊珊=]
點解冇人留cm架...T^T"
唉....冇人睇就唔POS啦....><"
2007-2-9 09:03 PM
彤彤=]
幾好呀!!
""我好想see下一集]]^^
2007-2-9 09:16 PM
珊珊=]
回復 #3 彤彤=] 的帖子
THX你喔!!!!!""
我會加油...打好D架啦...""[color=#00ff00][/color]
2007-2-9 09:56 PM
珊珊=]
[color=#00ff5b]終於有人睇啦...XD""
(({CH.2}))
果間學校BAND.2到....
BI*---E....1D係邊呢....問下老師先....
YEE*---(見到個老師)老師...請問1D班係邊呀???
MISS CHU*---係就係XX儀呀??我係你班主任-MISS CHU...
YEE*---哦....你可唔可以帶我去1D班呀??
MISS CHU*---SURE...*
[YEE*同MISS CHU 就走左啦....]
[BI* 同 KA* 仲係到搵緊老師...直到佢地見到個PREFECT..先返到課室....]
**********1D班**********
MISS CHU*---XX雪,,XX凝你地點解咁遲先到GA....""
BI*+KA*---我地唔識路,,,,
MISS CHU*---算啦...你地搵個位坐住先啦...""
跟住佢地2個就一齊坐啦...
仲坐左係YEE*前面...
BI* KA* 空 空
YEE*空 X 鋒
BI*(問KA*)HI ?! 你叫咩名呀??我叫阿BI*呀...你好...""
KA*---HI^^*我叫KA呀./..你好,,,
BI*---做個FD呀...^^
KA*---好呀XDD""
BI*---(問YEE*)HI...我係BI*呀??你叫咩名呀??做個FD呀??^^*
YEE*---HI~我叫YEE呀!!,,好呀^^*
BI*---(指住KA*)佢係我個FD呀....我地一齊做FD呀....OK??
YEE*---好呀XDDD,,
跟住佢地3個就係咁做左GOODFD....
MISS CHU*---E....點解仲有2個人未返既...''
[PANG!!"](傑同俊2個沖左入黎..)<--佢地遲到....""
MISS CHU*---做咩咁遲先返呀??!唔好同我講唔識路呀...!"
傑+俊---唔,,,,,塞車呀!!(講大話...)
MISS CHU*---唉...算啦///
(SOR,,唔記得左講,,,MISS CHU係全校最好人最令女既MISS...)\
MISS CHU*---搵個位坐低先啦~~!
傑+俊---好..OK""
佢地又係一齊坐...
BI* KA* 傑 俊
YEE*空 X 鋒
傑心諗:E,,,呢班都無咩令女咁既///果個好似OK喎....(講緊BI*)
俊心諗:E!!!(講緊BI*)哇!!!果個女仔好令女喎!!對眼好令令呀!!![著迷中]<--有少少姣的FEEL"-0-
MISS CHU*---好啦!!!~上堂啦~~~!
HEHE...跟住又會係點呢??唔該CM...同埋..我係咪作得好差??點解無人睇既..T^T..**[/color]
[[i] 本帖最後由 珊珊=] 於 2007-2-10 02:51 PM 編輯 [/i]]
2007-2-10 04:19 PM
珊珊=]
**** 付費信息，已經隱藏 *****
[[i] 本帖最後由 珊珊=] 於 2007-2-10 05:09 PM 編輯 [/i]]
2007-2-10 10:38 PM
kaya-]
好好笑......我好想睇落去呀
2007-2-11 10:18 AM
◆BaBe``=]
haha...好好睇>v<
十卜你哇!!!
呵.....我都係叫儀也..XD"
2007-2-11 05:25 PM
烏嚕
珊珊-33333-
加油哦...十卜你
幾好睇..唔錯牙=^(0o)^=
2007-2-11 06:09 PM
珊珊=]
[quote]原帖由 [i]kaya-][/i] 於 2007-2-10 10:38 PM 發表
好好笑......我好想睇落去呀 [/quote]
thx!你呀~~我而家pos呀~~!
2007-2-11 06:10 PM
珊珊=]
[quote]原帖由 [i]☆雪之女孩☆[/i] 於 2007-2-11 10:18 AM 發表
haha...好好睇>v<
十卜你哇!!!
呵.....我都係叫儀也..XD" [/quote]
THX你呀!!!係咩?!但係我唔係...><"
2007-2-11 06:11 PM
珊珊=]
[quote]原帖由 [i]烏嚕[/i] 於 2007-2-11 05:25 PM 發表
珊珊-33333-
加油哦...十卜你
幾好睇..唔錯牙=^(0o)^= [/quote]
THX>3<"
我會加油GA啦...
我都知有D悶....
我會開始講D好睇D既野....
2007-2-11 06:35 PM
珊珊=]
+++++++++BI家,,+++++++++++
BI食完飯,,沖完涼...10點鐘准時上床...
平時佢訓低無耐..就訓著,,但係今日就訓極都訓唔著,,,...
BI---唉,,,點解我個腦全部都係佢GA,,,[[係邊個佢呢??!]]
BI---唉!!!唔好再諗啦!!!聽日仲要番學GA!!(訓著左..ZzZz...")
-----------------------俊家,,,---------------------
俊---嘩!!唔得啦...佢,,,我,,,,唉~~我成個腦都係佢啦!!!好掛住佢tim,....""
_________________傑家________________________
傑---哼!!我一定要溝到佢...我就唔信我咁令仔..溝唔到佢,,"((嘔死"")
傑---果個鋒咁串呀喇,,,聽日佢就死得!!!""(奸笑中...)
[[[[[[[[[[{佢地3個講緊既果個(佢)係邊個呢??!}]]]]]]]]
==================明天==================
佢地個個都準備好...返學la~~!!
|||||||||||||||||xx中學||||||||||||||||||
BI+KA+YEE---早晨呀!!!哈哈~~
入到課室....
________________________唔打住...我唔得閒...SOR呀.._____________
今日我家姐出院....生左BB~~
佢係到喊...好CUTE,,,
^^*
2007-2-12 06:35 AM
烏嚕
你咁都得稼-w-
加油牙
2007-2-13 05:36 PM
珊珊=]
[quote]原帖由 [i]烏嚕[/i] 於 2007-2-12 06:35 AM 發表
你咁都得稼-w-
加油牙 [/quote]
嘻嘻,,,sor呀...""
thx你呀>3<"
2007-2-13 06:57 PM
珊珊=]
[color=#1b00ff][/color]
(({CH.4}))
入到課室...""
傑就沖埋去BI到...
傑---早晨呀令女!!冇見一陣又令左喎,,,
BI---(勁面紅..)係咩,,,THX...(細2聲..)
俊---(怕怕羞羞咁行過BI到,,)早..早晨呀,,,^^"
BI---HI,,(沖返埋自己位..)
BI---KA呀,,,點算呀,,,我好驚呀...
KA---下?!驚D咩呀??!
BI---我,,我...唔識講呀,,真係好驚呀,,,(想喊..)
KA---嘩~你做咩呀...唔好喊啦...到底咩事呀??!
BI---我,,佢地...明唔明呀?!(唔識講..)=.="
KA---下??!(都係唔明,,-0-'')姐係點呀...
YEE---咪咁豬啦,,,姐係佢地2個都中意佢,,,佢唔知點面對囉...豬!!
KA---下...咁搞笑??!係咪真嫁,,??
BI---(UP頭..)
KA---唉...真係慘,.,,''咁你中意邊個多D呀??
BI---(面紅,,唔敢講,,,+UM低頭...)
YEE---唉,,呢D野仲洗問既...梗係..(係KA耳邊個講)
KA---下!!!(好大聲..)
BI+YEE---SH,,,,!!""
KA---(細聲,,)真嫁??!
YEE---呃你有寶...
KA---咁既然你中意人地,,人地又中意你...咁咪好囉~~一齊咪得囉...
BI---唔得GA,,,我驚我會冇時間溫書,,,
YEE---唔會既...你好好咁分配時間咪得囉,..."
BI---係姐...""
KA---喂喂喂!!小心D呀...佢成日溝女架...佢未必係真心GA,,,
BI---咁又係...睇定D先啦...
YEE---都係既...日久見人心~~呵呵""=]
----00000000----"
陳SIR---各位同學!!!唔好再講野啦....今日MISS CHU 冇返,,由我黎代課...
全班---下!!!唔係呀嘛....
陳SIR---家陣我好差咩~~!!
全班---唔係唔係,,,,(點敢呀...)
陳SIR---咁就岩啦~~哈!!我而家要幫全班調位...
全班---下!!!!!!!!!!!唔好啦!!!!!!!!
陳SIR---無得傾!!!
[[陳SIR係一個好87既老師...最中意調位,.,,仲一定要係一男一女坐TIM....]]""
於是陳SIR就將我地班調得亂七八糟啦,...""唉,,,
YEE 俊 傑 KA
鋒 BI X X
佢地咁樣調左之後,,,全班就真係無人講野...
唉,,,就係咁...小息啦~~所有同學即刻露出久違既笑容...
又變返一堆堆既人群~~
BI---哇,,,我隔離果個人從來都唔講野既...
YEE---我隔離果條友好搞笑GA,,講野好好笑...又幾好人咁...成個低B仔...
KA---我隔離果個KAI架...講D野勁嘔心...又講埋哂DXXX....唉...唔好講啦~~~
BI---下~~原來佢係D咁既人..唉...都係唔好同佢一齊啦,,,
YEE---唔唔...
_____________上堂啦~~!!!_______________
2007-2-13 07:31 PM
kaya-]
55.......我想快d知道多d情節
我會十卜你.....]]
2007-2-14 08:03 AM
烏嚕
回復 #17 kaya-] 的帖子
嗯嗯..
冇錯啦..
2007-2-14 11:20 AM
彤彤=]
我都係呀
快d到下一集la
好好
2007-2-14 11:38 AM
kaya-]
[[快d post la!
十卜你.....