no.9~
今集有新加人物~~
禮----------令仔~~因為寧吹雞去打柔~~所以識到柔~~

係d(disco)度.....
柔::小漫~~~落去跳lor~~
漫::好呀~~行啦~~
柔::宇~`你地落唔落呀??
宇::好呀~~不過等我去一去洗手間先啦~~
柔::咁好啦~~
當宇係洗手間出黎既時候.....
佢見到寧~~~
寧::點呀~~宇~~估唔到你同佢仲可以係埋一齊bor~~
宇::你又想點呀???
寧::我只係想同番你一齊姐~~(一野咀左落宇度)
柔::唔該你放開佢呀~~
宇::小柔.........
柔::宇~~你唔好出聲....我籌先見到哂~~
柔::你哩條八婆....想溝我條仔~~你未夠班....身材又唔夠我好~樣又唔夠我令~~你收啦~~小妹妹.....
寧::你....仆x~~兄弟~~上~~
寧d兄弟出到黎......
個亞頭::邊邊令d就幫邊邊....
跟住佢成班就行左過去小柔度.....
柔::呵~~你d fd呀??哎呀~~有人吹左雞~~但係d人又唔幫佢...好lor呀~~
寧::你...咁你依加想點呀??
柔::我想點?我想你以後唔準係我同宇面前出現~~~如果唔係.....
寧::唔係既話咁點??
柔::兄弟~上~~
跟住班友又上左去寧度~捉住佢~~~
柔::咁你依加知未呀??
寧::知....知啦~~(寧好驚)
柔::咁仲唔走~~
寧::係既....
個亞頭::hi~~你叫咩名呀??我叫亞禮~
柔::我叫小柔....
宇::老婆仔~小漫叫我地返去啦~~
柔::哦~~行啦~亞禮~有機會再見啦~88~
禮::88~兄弟~我地走啦~~
係小柔佢地果邊....
宇::你岩岩做咩同果個人傾得咁開心呀??
柔::冇呀~~我同佢只係過嘔人......e....你做咩呀~~呷醋呀??
宇::我...我鬼得閒呷你醋呀~~
柔::哦~咁得啦~~ok哂~~我以後去搵仔你都唔準呷醋嫁~~
宇::下~唔好呀~~係呀係呀~~我岩岩呷醋呀~~-3-’’
柔::哦~你岩岩真係呷醋呀??(放大聲講~~)
宇::係呀!!!(都好大聲咁講~~)
恆同漫行埋黎~~
恆::原來我個fd會呷醋嫁喎....
宇::食屎啦你~~~

睇睇睇

快d快d快d快d快d

我想睇a

加油加油!!!好想知個結局哇><"努力!!!十卜十卜^^!

回復 #22 ^^傻妹妹 的帖子

好多謝你喔~
希望你會一直支持我啦~~
thx~~

回復 #23 水之天使乂冰 的帖子

結局呀?我諗應該冇咁快~~不過我會快dpost落去既~~
thx~~

第十章
其實小漫佢唔係佢依加個牙爸牙媽既親生女~佢只係收養既姐~~~
佢個養父養母同小柔父母係生意拍擋~~佢地父母去外國發展~~
所以就留佢地係香港度......
哩一日~~
小柔同宇出左街~~而恆有事做~所以冇陪到小漫~~
小漫係屋企冇野做~~所以就打算汁下d雜物~~
佢係自己床底搵到一箱佢未見過既野~~所以佢就拎d野出黎睇下~~
點知~~佢發現左一張出世紙~~~
佢係度睇...
佢睇到上面寫既係佢個名....
佢亞爸係.....居然係恆個亞爸......
小漫心諗.....我唔可以話俾人知嫁~~
唔可以呀!!!
我好中2恆嫁~~如果俾人知道我同佢係兩兄妹....咁..咁咪唔可以係埋一齊lor~~
唔得呀~~
所以~~小漫決定將d野收番埋~~永永遠遠都唔可以俾人知~~~
{多得你的深愛........以後離開....}小漫電話響...
漫::喂.....
恆::老婆~~我岩岩搞點哂d野啦~~你出唔出黎呀??
漫::好呀~~
恆::十分鐘之後~我黎接你....
十分鐘~~~~~~~~
漫::行得啦~~你同我去邊呀??
恆::去到你咪知lor~~
首先...恆同漫去左一間時裝店~~
恆::唔該俾件晚裝我呀~~
恆::拿~小漫~拎去換左佢~~
漫::下~~做咩要換左佢??
恆::你入左去換先啦!!!!!
漫::下~~哦~~~
出返黎之後~~~恆唔洗佢換番衫就拉左佢走~~
又同佢去左一間salon~~~
跟住又同佢去左一間酒店度~~~
入左個禮堂度~~~~~

點解冇人十卜我既~~~
係咪開始悶悶地啦???
嗚....唔通我寫d野真係咁差??

[quote]原帖由 [i]╭傻＊豬＊恩╯[/i] 於 2007-2-16 01:10 PM 發表
好多謝你喔~
希望你會一直支持我啦~~
thx~~ [/quote]


我會一直支持你家la

[quote]原帖由 [i]╭傻＊豬＊恩╯[/i] 於 2007-2-16 07:19 PM 發表
點解冇人十卜我既~~~
係咪開始悶悶地啦???
嗚....唔通我寫d野真係咁差?? [/quote]


點會呢

我好想睇家

你po多d  la

[quote]原帖由 [i]╭傻＊豬＊恩╯[/i] 於 2007-2-16 07:19 PM 發表
點解冇人十卜我既~~~
係咪開始悶悶地啦???
嗚....唔通我寫d野真係咁差?? [/quote]
更係唔悶啦,,,我永遠都支持傻豬恩作既野既~放心啦,,,冇人睇,,,但係我一定睇xD!

回復 #29-#30的帖子

多謝你地喔~~
不過我咁耐都未post你地會唔會唔再追嫁?????

第十一章
恆::小漫~~我依加同你黎見我亞爸呀~~~陣間小柔佢地都會黎嫁啦~~
漫::下~~你亞爸......(下~~如果見到佢亞爸....咁我咪會俾佢知道我係佢亞妹??唔得呀!~~~)
恆::做咩呀??呆左既??
漫::亞恆....陣間喱~~~你喱.....唔好話俾你亞爸知我叫咩名bor~~
恆::下~點解呀??
漫::嗯.....你唔好理咁多啦~~乖啦~~
恆::哦~~咁佢地點叫你好呀??
漫::叫....叫我做......小....小....小渝啦~~
恆::哦~~咁好啦
漫::你真係好抵錫喔....
恆::好呀~~咁錫番淡先啦~~
漫::e...你好衰嫁~~~
恆就kiss左落去~~
恆::好啦~~我地過去我亞爸度啦~~
漫::吾吾~~不過記住我係叫....
恆::小渝呀嘛~~~~
漫::係啦~~
恆同小漫就過左去恆亞爸度~~~

[quote]原帖由 [i]╭傻＊豬＊恩╯[/i] 於 2007-2-19 09:44 PM 發表
多謝你地喔~~
不過我咁耐都未post你地會唔會唔再追嫁????? [/quote]
唔會既...我會等~因為太好睇啦,,xD!
好想睇下佢呀爸知唔知邊個係小漫 ..

[quote]原帖由 [i]水之天使乂冰[/i] 於 2007-2-20 07:11 PM 發表

唔會既...我會等~因為太好睇啦,,xD!
好想睇下佢呀爸知唔知邊個係小漫 .. [/quote]








我實在太太太太太多謝你啦~~~
我以為我冇上咁耐.....會冇人支持....
好在.....仲有你......嗚嗚.....好感動呀~~

第十二章
恆::亞爸......
恆爸::e...恆~~你同女朋友仔黎睇我呀??
恆::咩睇你呀??係黎同你慶祝生日呀!!!
恆爸::咁多謝呀~~~
恆::亞爸你...真係呀~~~
恆爸::呵~~亞爸仲要招呼其他人......你地自便啦~~咪住....恆..你個女朋友仔叫咩名??
恆::佢叫小....小渝~~~
恆爸::小渝...幫我好好睇住佢呀~~~佢亞媽太寵佢啦~~~寵壞左....
恆::亞爸!!!!!!
恆爸::哈哈~~你地兩個慢慢啦~~~
恆爸心諗::果個小渝......個樣同小芊(小漫亞媽).....差唔多一模一樣呀.......
恆爸::亞華(恆爸個司機).....你幫我查下果個小渝呀....聽日話俾我知....
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------恆::嘻~~我亞爸係咁嫁啦
漫::唔緊要啦.....(希望佢唔會發現我係佢個女仲好啦~~)
恆::小漫...你睇下....小柔佢地黎啦~~
漫::小柔........
柔::小漫....
漫::柔....你過黎呀.....
柔::做咩呀~~
漫::小柔.....我今日呢......係屋企呢......汁野既時候呢...搵到我張出世紙....
柔::咁又點呀....
漫::我見到我亞爸個名係......恆亞爸.....
柔::下...真嫁....咁你諗住點呀....
漫::唔知呀....見步行步啦,,,,,,

點解冇人十卜我既.......
係咪開始悶....唔好睇呀????

十卜你啦,,,,,ok呀快d   post

我黎十卜你~快d po啦,
好想睇啊~加油喔~

[u][color=#000000]我又十卜你啦~加油牙>v<!!
唔係冇人睇架~好多人都好想睇的!![/color][/u]

[quote]原帖由 [i]水之天使乂冰[/i] 於 2007-2-23 10:55 AM 發表
我又十卜你啦~加油牙>v<!!
唔係冇人睇?[/quote]



真既......
多謝你呀....
我好感動呀.....
好彩有你.....成日十卜我...thx~~~^^